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Okay, I LOVE "Illmet Lane" -- not just the 5-part haiku, but also the IDEA of it as a setting for a lot of the other stuff you've been working on. It feels illustrious, if that's the right word? Lots of capacity.

Also, I do not remember reading these from your website at all! I don't know if it's my normal ADHD forgetfulness, but even favorite movies and books I've read a thousand times always feel new when I read them. :)

Thank you for sharing this and all of your work with us.

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Feb 12Liked by Jimmie Bise Jr

Wonderful haiku. Elegant.

I love the story, too. Sort of a chuckle with a tight throat at the end, if you know what I mean...

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